542. Chains Of Guilt Poem by Jaden Knight

542. Chains Of Guilt



My guilt appears to have forged itself
into a heavy chain of steel
a collar has clamped around my neck
choking me with its weight

It seems to get heavier every day
as it snakes behind me rattling evily
hindering my intended progress
constantly holding me back

Then one day I noticed some rust
that appeared to spread slowly through
with a mighty tug I broke loose
showering the links into the air
they evaporated in the morning sun
as if they have never existed

Am happy to enjoy my new found freedom
as I stride on with more confidence
guilt will never burden me in the same way again
am free to continue my growth
with nothing to drag me back

Monday, January 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: personal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 10 January 2017

i like all the stanzas. let's suppose this is my favorite: My guilt appears to have forged itself into a heavy chain of steel a collar has clamped around my neck choking me with its weight no rhyming OR humour/humor, YET i like it very much............the poem. thanks. carry on, Hercules! i mean Profanisaurus. this shall be the first poem displayed in Section C of my/our January 2017 'a showcase for PH poets' [found in my list of poems in PH]. and to MyPoemList. bri :) have a scintillating freedom from chains and whips and black net stockings, ............unless you LIKE those things! ! bri :)

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success