54 Gravity(Senryu) Comments

'Gravity cannot be held responsible for two people falling in love'-Albert Einstein, yet the process can be very much the same. this poem reminded me ot that qoute and how we are like coconuts waiting to fall, all we can hope for is a soft landing, great poem! -nkuli

Man, it's crazy work for how old you are. Great job.

Okay, I'll acept your telling the truth about your age and just say that this is a really good. You have a very good command of this form and you keep to the rules. That is good begining because you understand what is needed. This is a wonderful Senryu and I would be hard pressed to find someone much older write any better. Deepest respect to you and yours.