53 Sweet Inside I Was Comments

suddenly Tore me apart And ate all my insides Like a lion does to a deer In me, when nothing was left Used me to wrap a rock........ great imagination dear poet........... thank you very much for this poem dear poet.. tony

it is alovely poem athul.you are still like a young brother to all of us. keep up your good work.

very creative and well written. i give you a nine

wow! wonderful work athul, emptiness in the old is a sad thing indeed. -nkuli

I read it in the philosophical way...mortal becoming immortal after shedding ego...wonderful

Atul, For your age this writing is really great! Keep writing and also reading poems of renowned poets. Best wishes. -Raj Nandy

This poem shows you have tremendous imaginative power at this young age...the sign of becoming a good poet. Keep writing poems. Ten marks.

Great poem! And you're only ten years old? You have a bright future ahead as a poet.