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I saw the flicker in your eyes,
your beautiful porcelain smile.
I watched you closely as you
walked down the aisle.
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nice development. the voice too, is one of first person narrative - liked that. just wanted richer description.
unlike my childhood where I desired to see the twist or unexpected turn...I'm a complete sucker now for the well-told happy ending. sweet. -Tailor
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7/27/2025 4:00:52 PM # 1.0.0
M. G.....A sterling write indeed, as sentiment and memory, flounce about, and with such smooth flux, as if dancing itself! ''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR