500 Words And One Hand Comments

amazing and very abstract

impressive way of relating

Indeed a very deep write. Last line keeps the extract of whole.

This is very touching......and sensual. alana

A very wanting poem KK

Interesting Herbert...but a lot of memories.......

There seems to be so much of wanting, piled up inside.

Wonderful memmories so I never looked for greener grass I had it lock stock and barrell. Fantantic poem 10from me and 10 for the memmories cheers sylvia

Twenty three years old before you got a girl to cop a feel. No wonder you are so screwed up.