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Well Sir David, I finally was able to waddle my fat self to the computer and take a chance at reading antoher one of your poems. Thank God it wasn't about food. It did have some liquid refreshment mentioned, but not my style of beverage. I can relate to this one. We shoot here on this farm. Have shooting ranges, seventeen of them. I am a FAT pistol packin Ma, Ma! LOL 10/10/10!

Why does Paul Newman come to mind.. cool hand Luke or something :) This was like a movie - you are so good David, this is your thang :)

You can write a full story with so few words. I could see this in my mind, You are an amazing writer I think I can learn a lot from you just by reading your poems