Saturday, September 27, 2008

5 Spanish Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

Aldis lamp messages shimmer across breeze blown ripples
Early morning haze fuzzes distant hill top dreams
Home lies a sky away
Palm tree shadows crook beckoning fingers
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Bill Smith
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Marilyn Lott 25 October 2009

I found this poem to be relaxing and comforting. Very enjoyable - '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Egi David Perdana 27 September 2008

the stanza is very powerful and words is very deep

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