5 Senses Comments

Your repetition is effective.

I want so many of those too with my man but he is so far away. like April said short and sweet good job. Crystal

Short and Sweet! Great JOB

I really like it You have a way with your words

Finely penned! a 10 for this poem.

OK, pick you around...say 8? Just kidding...it's a nice poem. Cool idea, going through each one of the senses like that, then adding how you want it to relate to the love experience. Good read.