Monday, October 6, 2008

.5. See Food Diet Comments

Rating: 5.0

Please don’t buy me chocolates
No more greasy chips
Take away the cheesecake
It goes straight on my hips
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David Threadgold
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Lynda Robson 06 October 2008

David I have been on this diet for a while, why is it that all the things that taste so nice are bad for us? Very enjoyable write, 10 Lynda xx

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Ian Bowen 06 October 2008

David, good rhyming piece of work. Most enjoyable to read.10/10 Ian

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