Thursday, July 10, 2014

5, Oh Clock! Comments

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It is almost 5 o'clock,
And my heart seems to get stuck,
Already out of luck,
I whisper,
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Sandra Feldman
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Chuy Amante 10 July 2014

Alright, time for a reprogramming session! 5 o'clock, the heat is diminishing! ; -) grab the pole, time for fishing! : -) Now with a few, you're finishing! ; -) Sangria time, not Spanish, Finnish! Sing! ! ! : -) No Winter this year! : -) All Summer, chilled wine and beer! : -) Now when I type the magic 73442-Submit Reprogramming done, new flame is lit! : -) SUBMIT!

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Neela Nath Das 10 July 2014

The title of the poem is very nice!

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* Sunprincess * 10 July 2014

.........love the touch of mystery in this write.... ~ Not wanting to go back, To what turned all my Summers, Into Winter. ~

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