(-) 5 (My Love) Just A Preparation Comments
My bleeding tears
become a dewdropp in the verdant lawns of paradise
My festering wounds
transform magically into a sunkissed vista of radiance
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this is a beautiful poem, TO... I like the way you have expressed this feeling of the whole life culminating into this just one experience... Asma...
Gonna' haf' ta' change yir name, lass...from Tranquil Ocean to Vibrant Riptide! lol! The imagery here commands like a tidal wave, indeed...Just was passing through, & thought i'd visit a friend for a moment (that be you) ... Anyway...(- 5) LOVE is a + 10! ~ ~ ~
Nicely balanced poem which celebrates the divinity of souls conjunction. Pity PH continues to add an extra 'p' to 'drop' isn't it. Rgds, Ivan
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7/21/2025 12:51:28 PM # 1.0.0
..............................leading to the ultimate!