Wednesday, July 18, 2007

(-) 5 (My Love) Just A Preparation Comments

Rating: 5.0

My bleeding tears
become a dewdropp in the verdant lawns of paradise
My festering wounds
transform magically into a sunkissed vista of radiance
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Subbaraman N V 02 April 2008

..............................leading to the ultimate!

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Asma Bahrainwala 01 September 2007

this is a beautiful poem, TO... I like the way you have expressed this feeling of the whole life culminating into this just one experience... Asma...

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Preeti - is here! 08 August 2007

This one's just fab....you get better with every poem! !

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Patricia Gale 19 July 2007

Beautiful work, ah amore tis grand... Wonderful penning T.O.

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Gonna' haf' ta' change yir name, lass...from Tranquil Ocean to Vibrant Riptide! lol! The imagery here commands like a tidal wave, indeed...Just was passing through, & thought i'd visit a friend for a moment (that be you) ... Anyway...(- 5) LOVE is a + 10! ~ ~ ~

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Ivan Donn Carswell 18 July 2007

Nicely balanced poem which celebrates the divinity of souls conjunction. Pity PH continues to add an extra 'p' to 'drop' isn't it. Rgds, Ivan

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