(5) Mockingbirds Revisited Comments

Powerful and poignant. Nice write!

You have to hold your position, don´t you see they´ll get a fastbreak and win? yea agree with your say you did here in this poem an the plea you presented is meaningful, based of congnition of things, the idea is rich and the end of your poem is really very attractive and interesting..10/10

Fascinating and evocative. A cloud of images, leading to a profound sense of loss. - Will

Who will decipher the poems for us. ending is so quaint... Conducive thought. & intercepting? 's keep the reader's interest.. SusxGLx