Thursday, October 9, 2008

.5. I Do Comments

Rating: 5.0

I bared my soul to show my love
The day that we were wed
I listened to the vicars words
Repeating what he said
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David Threadgold
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Linda Winchell 09 October 2008

Sir David, this one made me want to run off and get married again, NOT! ! Great words from the heart.10! When you said you - to or (too?) Just a suggestion.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 09 October 2008

David! You write soo well! the last one was simply superb........10

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Cherish Bernstein 09 October 2008

wow you can write amazingly...you should check out my poems

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