Friday, October 3, 2008

.5. Gone Fishing Comments

Rating: 4.9

Fishermen cast out their nets
We all in turn go fishing
Some will use a rod and line
While others fish by wishing
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David Threadgold
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Brian Jani 17 May 2014

Nicely payed down.it flows nicely.well done

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Jeff Varanyak 05 November 2008

I love it, especially the last stanza. touches an old fisherman's heart!

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Ian Bowen 03 October 2008

David, loved the 'sock stanza'. Notice you never included 'fishing for complements'...well here is one: Well written.10/10 Ian

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