Sunday, November 16, 2008

5-Dreams And Thoughts Comments

Rating: 3.5

Suppressed below they try to break through
Suppressed down the ages, they try to
Reassess their identity
Regressive attitude have marked their entity
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shreya chatterjee
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R. H. Peat 31 July 2022

Start writing your dreams down and you'll be surprised what happens. Also become active within the dream and it might take place overnight.

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Sonya Florentino 11 October 2009

we are our dreams and thoughts...but surely some of them break through....or we wouldn't be holding on for this long.....

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Manonton Dalan 16 November 2008

i hope they listen for a moment. nice poen shreya. thanks.md

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I like this poem a lot its very nicely put.. I love the expression that you have used especially the ending.. Great piece of work...

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 November 2008

Good poem; good thought. But why u say rotting cage ur inside(or any other persn's) . Let us presume all insides are beautiful........because there is soul....

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