Tuesday, September 16, 2008

.5. Calamine No Pal O Mine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Twisting turning sunshine burning
Blistered back and never learning
Had a notion using lotion
Could have saved so much commotion
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David Threadgold
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Stacey Watts 17 September 2008

We never quite learn our lesson every year it is the same old story? This is a very funny true poem.

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Anand Dixit 16 September 2008

Very well written and funny...score 10

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