Tuesday, September 23, 2008

.5. Amuse-Ling Comments

Rating: 5.0

Muesli what a funny thing
Like eating chips of wood
I eat it every breakfast time
Because I’m told it’s good
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David Threadgold
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Dee Daffodil 27 September 2008

LOL...Once again, you've taken a simple thing which most people can relate to, and turned it into a great poem! ! Poets unite....no more soggy breakfasts! ! ! ! : -) Hugs, Dee

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Ian Bowen 25 September 2008

David, very clever, and with a great deal of truth to it. Love your humour.10/10 Ian

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