Friday, October 3, 2008

.5. A Punch-Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

Punch and Judy always fighting
Crocodile is always biting
Baby crying Punch looks rough
Judy says she’s had enough
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David Threadgold
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Bob Gibson 11 October 2008

You took us back to summers by the sea, briliantly portrayed, yes a 10

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Gordon Somerville 06 October 2008

Many years ago, I assisted the punch and judy man on Brighton Pier, and your poem was the script for EVERY performance. It brought back some (claustrophobic) memories. The poem flowed very nicely, and painted a picture in my mind, with each verse I read. A very well thought out, and penned piece of art work. Cheers Gordon...

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Ian Bowen 03 October 2008

David, loved this to bits. A great laugh, and written to entertain.10/10 Ian

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