.5. A Losing Streak Comments

I used to be a jockey! when i was very slim did you know it was at water jump, that i learnt to swim i remember striking the double, I was in disgrace i didn't win you see, i just fell off twice in the race!

very good, you are better off buying a lottery ticket then you know that your chances are one in millions, better luck next time 10

Classic in fine British traditional (BTW Thanks for the review, hope you read some more of mine, it's great to connect with a fellow rhyming poet!)

Hilarious Dave - couldn't help laughing at all your bad luck ! ! Hope you were using poetic licence here..... A great poem and worth every bit of 10 - wish they could be pounds eh? Fondly from Fay.