Tuesday, October 7, 2008

.5. A Life Fulfilled Comments

Rating: 4.5

Crystal waters flowing fast
Where salmon wait to leap
Clear as glass I see the rocks
With weeds that sway down deep
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David Threadgold
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Chuck Audette 06 February 2009

They want to put a hydroelectric plant at a lovely waterfall near where I live. I think they misunderstood me when I heard and said 'Oh, Dam it! ' -c

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Marilyn Lott 08 October 2008

You described so well the direction these fish must take at the end of their lives. Nature's cycle is so fascinating. I love your fresh uplifting themes and wonderful rhyming style, David! '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Tia Maria 07 October 2008

I love this - I actually cried when I watched the old salmon so big & old & ugly as they died 10

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