.5. A Happy Ending Comments

superb as always...........

As I read, I found myself stumbling on your words, as I got so exited. That reading experience brought back some great memories I thought was forever lost. Thanks for making them surface once again

goooooooooood story...you must write novels.......enjoyed

You're a true story teller Dave. I really like your spin on familiar tales as well as the unfamiliar ones. Great rhyme and meter but that's always a trademark with you. (10)

I enjoyed this version of a classic. Nicely done! Hugs, Dee

royal rhymes of four, verse from days of yore, happy endings usually in Hollywood and Bollywood well done 10

A lovely modernistic poem of a of an old classic, loved the rhyming David well done