Thursday, March 6, 2008

$5 A Barrel Of What? Comments

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Oil?
Now sold at what?
Five dollars a barrel?
This is an immediate sign,
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Bri Edwards 17 October 2018

(cont.) i think i 'sent' another piece of comment, but i don't know if you'll get it. it's been a bit of a pain in my to continue sending LONG comments [ now that PH limits size of comments ]. bri :) p.s. have you found lately that PH does not supply a Send Message to click on in order to type a private message (not poem comment or reply to an Inbox message) ? ?

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Bri Edwards 17 October 2018

(cont.) i think i 'sent' another piece of comment, but i don't know if you'll get it. it's been a bit of a pain in my to continue sending LONG comments [ now that PH limits size of comments ]. bri ;) p.s. have you found lately that PH does not supply a Send Message to click on in order to type a private message (not poem comment or reply to an Inbox message) ? ?

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Bri Edwards 17 October 2018

(cont.) the price of caviar? well, don't complain; someone has to catch the fish, squeeze its eggs out, and can them, ship them, etc. etc. i'll take TWO cans. and hold the lox (also a fish product) but i'll take a toasted bagel and cream cheese. make that one for me and one for Lawrence. to MyPoemList...i guess. : ( or :) ? (cont.)

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bri edwards 17 October 2018

(cont.) the price of caviar? well, don't complain; someone has to catch the fish, squeeze its eggs out, and can them, ship them, etc. etc. i'll take TWO cans. and hold the lox (also a fish product) but i'll take a toasted bagel and cream cheese. make that one for me and one for Lawrence. to MyPoemList...i guess. : ( or :) ? bri :) (cont.) ?

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bri edwards 17 October 2018

(cont.) i've the feeling this poem has more to offer than i've gotten out of it. i think it is good, but barrel or gallon makes a difference in my outlook. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 17 October 2018

made n the shade.... with a lemonade? [i did not make that up, but heard it years ago, as, i assume, L.S.P. did also.] i'm undecided. is Barrel meaning this: barrel (bbl) 1. Unit of volume for crude oil and petroleum products. One barrel equals 42 US gallons or 35 UK (imperial) gallons...? ? ? or do you mean gallon? ? it makes a huge difference in the poem's meaning, which i'm definitely not sure of (now) . (cont.)

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Tan Pratonix 25 October 2017

Still maintaining a high degree of wit. Glad to see you back!

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Patricia Grantham 09 April 2015

The price of oil is larger than our pocket books or wallets. Maybe horse and buggy will return soon, Inspiring Lawrence.

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Johnathan Stokes 22 November 2012

Loved this. Clever indeed

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Patricia Joan Jones 12 January 2012

A clever outcry against an ominous situation. Excellent. Love it!

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John Mccullagh 01 November 2009

Makes me want to run out an buy a used Prius!

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C. P. Sharma 08 July 2009

A poetic concern on the rising price of the fossil fuel that squeezes the existence of the common man. Geat poen on contemporary issue. CP

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