Saturday, May 19, 2007

4th Of July Fireworks Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s that time of year again
We’re nearing the 4th of July
Nothing quite as pretty
As sparks against the sky
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Marilyn Lott
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Melvina Germain 30 July 2015

I love the flow of it and the rhythm, found myself wanting to sing a song about three white ducks.....

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

strobes of patriotic light reflected from these sincere words

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Michael Gale 11 November 2008

Ah yes-Patriotics are displayed in many ways besides as brilliant sights and lights in the night lit skies. Great tenner of a poem. God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

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Mamta Agarwal 30 October 2008

proud and patriotic- lovely poem Marilyn. some dates help us reflect over our heritage; 10 Mamta

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 April 2008

Hello there Marilyn. I just noticed that we celbrate the same day of May for a birthday. Happy early birthday to you. I love your poem, and may have read it once already. Did you check out my poem on the Fouth of July? Bless you my friend. LC

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Francis Duggan 16 January 2008

A good poem this one Marilyn about love of Motherland very good work

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Raul Castelan 08 June 2007

What rhyme, what words, you did well in this one. The way you went full circle just made it better. BRAVO! ! !

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Marilyn Lott

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