Saturday, May 19, 2007

4th Of July Activities Comments

Rating: 4.9

The 4th of July Activities
Are something we all enjoy
It’s the one day that’s set aside
For every adult, girl and boy
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Marilyn Lott
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Seema Chowdhury 08 November 2009

very nice poem thanks for sharing. its such a pleasure to celebrate the independence day.

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Nikunj Sharma 31 July 2009

May everyday you celebrate The freedom in every breath May freedom be your way Between life n death

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Shashendra Amalshan 06 June 2009

Yeah Feb 4 th is the independence day for SL people....liked this one...great way to celebrate a great day indeed, by composing a great poem....nice one ma'am regards with lots of love shan

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David Threadgold 07 October 2008

Hi Marilyn. A very proud dedication to what sounds to me like a truly great day to remember each and every year.10/10 Regards Dave T

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John Tiong Chunghoo 23 August 2008

great fourth of july. i wish the day also becomes meaningful to me one day. great write marilyn.

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Amanda Bailey 26 September 2007

this is beautifully written good job :)

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Raul Castelan 08 June 2007

Yes, indeed, that is the true American way. The way you went into detail just gave it more excitement. Splendid job.

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Marilyn Lott 13 March 2017

Thank you so much, Raul!

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