Sunday, June 18, 2006

4ever Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wanting....needing
something that can never be
Knowing deep down
you are gone
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Grace Hays
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Brian Dorn 28 July 2006

Grace, I like the visual and metaphorical effect of the broken glass at the end adding to a powerful and well written piece! Brian

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BEAU GOLDEN 01 July 2006

Strong, passionate. dig deeper.

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Grace Hays

Grace Hays

Wichita, KS
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