(494) Tormented Comments

Not a fragile poem! ! ! But one of a tremendously great Truth! ! ! ! I could not have stood there, shaking my head. Beauty of the images, yet burned to the eyes of the reader...and their heart. Who wouldn't want to read this poem? Great and great again! ! ! xxElysabeth

Thanks for sharing this one with me. I hung on every word and loved them all. Really a great poem. Your friend always -David

I like this very much. I have seen a similar event. Does one help and does one run. Very good imagery after a superb opening....'glazed' and 'oozed'. As anyone else evr used these words as you did? ....B

such wonderful lines with profound images and amazing flow well done, , blessings to you and yours..Cecil

Wow. Tremendous, Melvina. 'much juice of the damned'. Exceedingly, wow. -Tailor.