Saturday, May 12, 2007

(490) Dancing Pen Comments

Rating: 3.4

The morning sun
finds its way into a room,
capturing a couple
newly engaged in an act so vivid,
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Melvina Germain
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... Sheila 19 May 2007

Short, sweet and funny. You mastered dry humor in this one. It's great!

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Wow, another thought provoking piece of poetry! Very original, funny and just short, simple and a well written piece of art... lol, you are really quite funny did you know that..this one hit me funny Melvina. Keep on keeping on........... =Shelley=

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Ernestine Northover 12 May 2007

A dream of a poem Melvina, such a sweet read, and a somewhat romantic content. Very nice indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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David Harris 12 May 2007

Melvina I can see the dance was really in your pen yesterday. First the Dance, now a dancing Pen. Lol. Another brilliant little masterpiece here. Top Marks from me and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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