Saturday, May 3, 2008

46 The Poor Comments

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Horrible the life of poor
In this world where money is superior
When are the few times, think of them
About the ones living in the slums!
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Athul KrishnaA
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delilah contrapunctal 09 May 2008

Hello Athul this compassionate and well written poem speaks from your dear young heart...and your shining soul...thankyou be well. Love, D.

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Alison Cassidy 07 May 2008

It's not how much you have that matters, but what you do with it. Your poem is compassionately written. Your heart is beautiful. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Stephen Yeandle 03 May 2008

Most impressive my young friend.

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Athul KrishnaA

Athul KrishnaA

Kottayam, Kerala
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