Saturday, April 26, 2008

43 A Wish Comments

Rating: 3.5

A dawn like a smile, heavenly lovely
A day sunny allthrough, very nicely
End of the road, light lit turn
And offer of prosperity, sooth the burn
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Athul KrishnaA
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Aaron Tate 05 May 2008

Ah, the truth be it, peace and prosperity never be in the same sentence, unless your saying they are never together. :) Excellent Write.

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Nkululeko Mdudu 05 May 2008

lovely write, you're very talented.

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Six Three 29 April 2008

enjoyed it man. keep it up

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C.R. Clark 27 April 2008

A very nice write, my friend. Thank you and best wishes. Richard

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Ency Bearis 26 April 2008

nicely done.... Ency Bearis

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Athul KrishnaA

Athul KrishnaA

Kottayam, Kerala
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