Wednesday, November 16, 2005

412 B , The Drunk Comments

Rating: 5.0

THE drunk has intercourse with
his booze, his old man face is
flush, and his feet shuffle like a
duck on the beach.
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Ruby Root 09 July 2006

Hi David, I can just picture this one. This was comical. You are a really great writer. I love your style and imagery. Take care

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Mandira Mitra 03 May 2006

i liked the similes. nice poem.

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Duncan Wyllie 17 April 2006

Very well done, Love Duncan

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