////40 Years Under The Rain//// Comments

Quit a good harmony of the sandy life and wetland life. Great.

Quit a good combination of desert and southern life. Great.

dostoevsky? ? ? Russia is still dying but Dostoevsky is alive for ever?)) Great novels are not a real life that is much more complicated... So many implies and meanings in your shorrt lines: Bible, russian crazy souI... I only don't have an idea where paper women came from? to be continued...

short but very sweet well done :)

^_^ interesting, Interesting, Well done, I like.

I don't understand it probably because of my lacking the education but I like the way it flows and how it is organized. Thanks, Claudia

..wow Khaled..you are a wizard with words.. ..40 years under the rain and still the desert lives in my clothes.. ..now these lines are very meaningful and deep.. ..loved your poem..10/10..

I LOVE DOSTOEVSKY IM HAPPY THAT YOU USED HIM IN THIS POEM HMMM THIS IS VERY MEANINGFUL

Beautiful poem ' i but what's Dostoevsky

great poem i like it but what's Dostoevsky

like big like wonderful short but sharp and witty

Just let the desert live in your clothes, not in your heart.

Deserts living in one's clothes is bearable enough. But for deserts to live in the heart is bane.

closer to 60 here, and it's still raining! good one!

Wow...this is really good. Thank you for sharing.

Great powerful poem.

I like your poem... But if I lived 40 years under the rain, I would have purchased an umbrella... (bad joke I know) I do like your poem though...

No comment more than to say it's really great well done.

Deciphering forty years with Dostoevsky challenging him with the love of women made of papers and those sands of time which got into your pen to write autographs would not have been easier than the words which made them now in your poetry.Splendid write.Kharasho! Dasvidanya

Wow! What a powerful and deep write that clearly show your great poetic talent! Your potential in the Poetry World is unmeasurable! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with your great talented writes (You are a free bird dancing and singing the the skies) Love and Peace for always! ...