Monday, January 13, 2003

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at the track today,
Father's Day,
each paid admission was
entitled to a wallet
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Charles Bukowski
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Shaun Cronick 05 April 2020

From the great man who wrote Ham on Rye with horrid Henry.

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Dominic Windram 05 April 2020

Great poem... replete with the kind of acute social observation that only Bukowski can muster.

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 April 2020

so many of them like that, there and not there, breathing, farting, commenting, waiting for a thunder that will not arrive, waiting for the charging white horse of Glory, ............../// what an excellent poetic expression/// greatly penned

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 April 2020

their life shines through; miracles happen, even in . I decide to stay for one more race. Great poem of Bukowski.. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 April 2020

their life shines through; miracles happen, even in ....... wonderful imagery. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of the day for the second time.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 April 2019

" these little walking whales" , a great modern poem coming with immense force and well deserved modern poem of the Day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 April 2019

Tracking father's day with an impressive nice title is definitely an excellent poem. Monday is definitely waiting for them to shine. A nice poem is chosen as the modern poem of the day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 April 2019

Tale! ! Gone stale! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Adrian Flett 05 April 2019

What a ride from this great poet.

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* Sunprincess * 12 March 2015

.......wow 40.000 was a lot of people at the track....sounds like a lot of fun :)

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Mazhari David 22 May 2014

Nothing will overcome the perfection of the horse Spinoza..* *

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I think that it is incomplete and still interesting.

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Matthew Merlino 10 September 2010

I don't believe this is the full poem.

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Tai Chi Italy 13 June 2009

Every Father deserves one. An aptly timed poem. We loved the races. Smiling, ironically Tai

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M. Bronson Russell 29 July 2008

Sounds like modest surprise after winning a not-so-modest sum...

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Tom J. Mariani 09 November 2007

One of his short ones. Must have written it on a bar napkin. Maybe he would have finished it if he hadn't ordered another short one.

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J P Klegg 04 July 2005

Either over my head or a little disappointing for CB.

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