I may have died three days ago
But to look at me you'd never know
I was hung on a cross, crucified
Brutally beaten and left to die
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Nicely written, and it all seems like Jesus is actually speaking the words. I love how you did that. Keep writting like that. <
This is great! Really well written. Well done. Continue in Christ and in poetry! ! =)
i love your poems about Christ.. so often we forget what He has done for us...and how much we suffer and even when we remember..we still will never know how much He truely went through for us....thank you for not being ashamed of Him
Like Hannah below, it feels like you were there... Wonderful... Colin J...