Monday, March 17, 2008

(4) The Last Days - The Resurrection Comments

Rating: 2.7

I may have died three days ago
But to look at me you'd never know
I was hung on a cross, crucified
Brutally beaten and left to die
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Colin J... 27 July 2009

Like Hannah below, it feels like you were there... Wonderful... Colin J...

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Hannah Martin 31 July 2008

Nicely written, and it all seems like Jesus is actually speaking the words. I love how you did that. Keep writting like that. <

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Jessica Jemima 23 April 2008

This is great! Really well written. Well done. Continue in Christ and in poetry! ! =)

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Kristi G 31 March 2008

i love your poems about Christ.. so often we forget what He has done for us...and how much we suffer and even when we remember..we still will never know how much He truely went through for us....thank you for not being ashamed of Him

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