Wednesday, April 24, 2013

4 Stages- - (Love) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Your presence
is an experience
of rare love I ever
had...
...
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Neela Nath Das
COMMENTS
Rajnish Manga 19 December 2015

The poem unfolds a variety of sentiments through different stages of a protagonist's love life and all of them have been portrayed quite diligently- simple and succinct. Thanks, Neela ji, for sharing such an amazing poem.

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Muhammad Ali 22 January 2014

: -) . a smile, i have. smile in worth and worst. and love... love lives in life-full heart. may the Heart beats, and beats...

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Lovely poem touching indeed...life has to move on... Please do write some comments for my poems too...

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Heather Wilkins 04 July 2013

a lost love is difficult to endure, but tomorrow will come, and it will be better.

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R.j. Wynn 26 May 2013

10's for Hari Smith Holms, you son of a gun!

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Valsa George 08 May 2013

Soul stirring and poignant! Free flow of unveiled emotions! ! Leaving space for others, let us move on! Nothing is static! !

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Ken E Hall 06 May 2013

Love we all want and to loose a treasure is hard to imagine you present it with honesty from your heart...regards

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Hans Vr 30 April 2013

Deep and thorough. Another butterfly has hijacked you, so nicely written. there is a difference between -in love- and -love- the first one is something we fall in and out of, an infatuation the second one is a verb, a do-word, somehting we do. I agree that the first one comes and goes and is associated with tremendous feelings Very nicely written in this poetic and melodious poem

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 April 2013

love smells sweetly but it is bitter and sweeter, position of tongue get you the taste/ a poem writ on based on truth thank u

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Valerie Dohren 28 April 2013

Lost love, but we move on and find it anew. Very well penned Hari.

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Theodora Onken 28 April 2013

Oh Harry...so deep, so bittersweet- so well penned; We can all identify with loves that we have lost!

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David Wood 26 April 2013

A profound poem of live that is lost. A good write Hari.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 April 2013

A NICE POEM ON LOST LOVE.- The lines- another buuterfly has hijacked you from me- are lovely touching lines.!

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