Saturday, October 25, 2008

.4. Room For Improvement Comments

Rating: 5.0

The bathroom with seven foot cistern
In pink was the suite plus black seat
White tiles had been grouted with mildew
Plus cracks where the walls didn’t meet
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David Threadgold
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Fay Slimm 25 October 2008

All your lovely rhymes give me such an chuckle especially at the end - you have a great talent for the unexpected. Thank you for this one. Again my ten

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Roy Storey 25 October 2008

A bit like me at the moment i got that cold bug thats going about, good poem

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