(-) 4 (My Love) Tum/You -Bilingual Comments

In short everything in life- if you can spare a few minutes, pl. go through my-LOVE IS THE BASIS OF LIFE- in the PH-reflecting similar thoughts!

Valentine's soul search, nice reading

OK were you the one who told me such feelings could not be put into words, , , and yet this flaming piece of imagry has set the moment on fire.... and me searching for a cold glass of water.......... well done..

Nice poem. But 'kapkapi' sounds a bit feverish. What you mean is perhaps - sensation, but 'kapkapi' means shivering/trembling in pain or fear. How about -'badan ki sansanaahat'or 'thirkan'?