Created from potter's clay
Breathed into His spirit
Sight, hearing, smell, taste, touch endowed.
While is purified-
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A devotional poem with a difference, , , good imagery, ,10+
ok now this is amazing! ...love the fluency the rippling devotion in the verse...great job!
Wonderful Poem...nicely written..i luv these lines..'Created From Potter's clay Breathed in to his spirit' Thanks... Priyaa Arora
this poem touches me in a way thats a little odd but i like it. keep writing
A very interesting phrases and visual. Keep writing and sharing. Marilyn
No, fear not desert, ocean, fear not foe Care dare within you, say to satan 'no'. And sure, Return unto HIM with all reckon! ....... Very passive finish..... i thought tune would be so high...... why to talk about care dare within you.....you must read shikwa of Iqbal....... or shelley's poetry..... or the dialogue of Amir Muawiya with satan as comrehended by Rumi. Technically speaking, its immaculate......thematically, wayward to me....... flight of imagination has been replaced with the show of self imposed piety........ Sir, if you feel it as intentional criticism, then, i seek your forgiveness. i did'nt mean so.
very intense poem, we are a tiny speck of the macrocosm, its human aspiration to reach upto Him. spiritual and inspiring10+++
a deific sparkle from word of thoughts into a wonderful poem...to be near to HIM , , , purifically written into spiritual upliftment... Ency Bearis
amazing creation....of me and them 'Created from potter's clay Breathed into His spirit Sight, hearing, smell, taste, touch endowed. While is purified- Manifests the miror Devine sparkle! ' yes amazing creation from nothing but clay to me...to them the magnificent creatures are me...and them
spiritually refreshing...brought me more closer to HIM.....cause of Him friends and foes are the same to me, they are all friends which I pray religiously. a 10 for you...
Education and inspiration appear in this reflection upon creation.
A very intense, spiritual picture of the journey of life. Your message is profound. Ten from me. Warm regards, Sandra
No, fear not desert, ocean, fear not foe Care dare within you, say to satan 'no'. yes...human life is meant train one's self to reach this stage...
sarwar, beautiful personification of Eve the woman you love---tell me how u say she has those 5 servants---specially the one of doubting Thomas. very beautifully written with lots of hidden meanings. ---took me ages to understand your beautiful mind like the Holy Grail. great write and hats off to you--the intellilgent poet A+ and 10+ as always. regards anjali
Wow! Great poem and devotion on HIM Ten dr. sakti