Tuesday, September 16, 2008

4- Microcosm Comments

Rating: 5.0

Created from potter's clay
Breathed into His spirit
Sight, hearing, smell, taste, touch endowed.
While is purified-
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sarwar chowdhury
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Wow! Great poem and devotion on HIM Ten dr. sakti

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Sadiqullah Khan 26 September 2008

A devotional poem with a difference, , , good imagery, ,10+

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 26 September 2008

ok now this is amazing! ...love the fluency the rippling devotion in the verse...great job!

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Jay P. Narain 25 September 2008

Another great poem. Gives us the faith in Him or Her.

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Chitra - 18 September 2008

spirituality personified, fine gems shared here

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Priya Arora 17 September 2008

Wonderful Poem...nicely written..i luv these lines..'Created From Potter's clay Breathed in to his spirit' Thanks... Priyaa Arora

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Seema Chowdhury 17 September 2008

an excellent write i must say. well done Sarwar! !

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Sabrina Burton 17 September 2008

this poem touches me in a way thats a little odd but i like it. keep writing

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Marilyn Lott 17 September 2008

A very interesting phrases and visual. Keep writing and sharing. Marilyn

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Wali Jamali 17 September 2008

No, fear not desert, ocean, fear not foe Care dare within you, say to satan 'no'. And sure, Return unto HIM with all reckon! ....... Very passive finish..... i thought tune would be so high...... why to talk about care dare within you.....you must read shikwa of Iqbal....... or shelley's poetry..... or the dialogue of Amir Muawiya with satan as comrehended by Rumi. Technically speaking, its immaculate......thematically, wayward to me....... flight of imagination has been replaced with the show of self imposed piety........ Sir, if you feel it as intentional criticism, then, i seek your forgiveness. i did'nt mean so.

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Mamta Agarwal 17 September 2008

very intense poem, we are a tiny speck of the macrocosm, its human aspiration to reach upto Him. spiritual and inspiring10+++

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Ency Bearis 17 September 2008

a deific sparkle from word of thoughts into a wonderful poem...to be near to HIM , , , purifically written into spiritual upliftment... Ency Bearis

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Wanelisa Albert 17 September 2008

amazing creation....of me and them 'Created from potter's clay Breathed into His spirit Sight, hearing, smell, taste, touch endowed. While is purified- Manifests the miror Devine sparkle! ' yes amazing creation from nothing but clay to me...to them the magnificent creatures are me...and them

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C T Heart 17 September 2008

spiritually refreshing...brought me more closer to HIM.....cause of Him friends and foes are the same to me, they are all friends which I pray religiously. a 10 for you...

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 17 September 2008

Education and inspiration appear in this reflection upon creation.

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Sandra Fowler 17 September 2008

A very intense, spiritual picture of the journey of life. Your message is profound. Ten from me. Warm regards, Sandra

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Rema Prasanna 17 September 2008

good one Sarwar, created from potter's clay microcosms.10

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Indira Babbellapati 17 September 2008

No, fear not desert, ocean, fear not foe Care dare within you, say to satan 'no'. yes...human life is meant train one's self to reach this stage...

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Anjali Sinha 17 September 2008

sarwar, beautiful personification of Eve the woman you love---tell me how u say she has those 5 servants---specially the one of doubting Thomas. very beautifully written with lots of hidden meanings. ---took me ages to understand your beautiful mind like the Holy Grail. great write and hats off to you--the intellilgent poet A+ and 10+ as always. regards anjali

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Tom Balch 17 September 2008

A very creative piece Sawar, well penned regards Tom

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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