Friday, June 20, 2008

.4. Cuddle Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where shall I see you this morning?
Your vision a blur in my head
Try as I might to sleep well last night
I was tossing and turning instead
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David Threadgold
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Greenwolfe 1962 22 June 2008

I didn't examinethis poem in exact detail, but I've seen enough to tell me that this writer is pure gold. GW62

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Jurietta Duraan 20 June 2008

Lovely in rhyme... I have to admit I have never been a fan of rhyme, but your poem is effortless (well, it reads effortlessly) and flows very well... beatiful romantic poem.

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