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stations.as thought...the body a train..very well said about loneliness

A different station! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

he quietness is deafening You lay paralyzed by all your fears But your mind a train,100 miles per hour...... wishing for dreams......... expecting a miracle in life and thoughts to escape from such a dark reality........... prayer is the only answer. relationship with God.......... thank u dear poetess. tony

So very well written loved the train metaphor 10++

Dear Jennifer, such a marvelous poem.......10++++++++++