Monday, September 29, 2008

.4. All Things Bright Comments

Rating: 5.0

Next time I must check before planting
When the merchant delivers my seed
I ploughed the top field in the morning
Made sure that I’d cleared it of weed
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David Threadgold
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Shimon Weinroth 12 October 2008

good attitude making the best of a foul up with merry lines of rhyme well done I would have turned purple with apoplexy and still be muttering and stuttering cheers Shimon

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Dee Daffodil 02 October 2008

LOL...Perhaps you could use them in a nice salad David! ! LOL Very witty poem! Hugs, Dee

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Rani Turton 01 October 2008

That's really sweet. Was it true?

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