Thursday, June 19, 2008

.4. A Good Tip Comments

Rating: 5.0

The waitress asked “ready to order”
I said “I’d like that with a please”
A sarcastic please was included
To go with my two fresh cream tea’s
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David Threadgold
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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

Interesting poem with interesting style. Love it.

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Marilyn Lott 15 September 2008

Loved it, David, and boy can I relate! Love your writing style - a 10! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Steve Reynolds 15 July 2008

pretty funny peom and greaqt to read! really enjoyed this poem

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Subbaraman N V 07 July 2008

That is how the hotels are maintained these days!

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