Thursday, July 10, 2008

.4. A Fishy Tale Comments

Rating: 5.0

A haven for wet wildlife
Within our pond there’s load’s
Lots of newts and tadpoles
And many ugly toads
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David Threadgold
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Pamela Lutwyche 05 October 2008

I am Sorry about your goldfish, I sort of shed a tear, for I too had a gold fish, but he is no longer is here. Again good poem.

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Reshma Ramesh 19 September 2008

very neat...... well done

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Bob Gibson 13 September 2008

Briliantly funny, loved it

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 12 July 2008

Good story nicely told in poem with rhyme and rhythm

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