Saturday, January 27, 2007

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You see.
I reflect on your note,
you composed a while ago.
I tuck it back inside its box
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Kate Hamilton
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Neil Gray 13 February 2007

That's more like it hun. Raw, honest and with a touch of Old Charlie Boy. Great work.

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Goldy Locks 28 January 2007

rough - i like your stretch of idea. here, with the letter as the subject & the evolving woman behind it. keep on SusxGLx

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