3rd Street Comments

Sad write of losing someone close. This makes the best poetry. Thank you.

Beautiful, Deborah! Truly a mindblowing piece of work.. fantastic! ! ! Carry on.. :)

awesome, fantastic, wonderful! ! ! ! ! you are great! ! !

An extra ordinary poem in truly your style. Leaves me amazed. A full 10.

Melodic movement steers this work, through tight, crisp, mellifluous structure. Employment of apropriate pathos & and empathy set a soberly capturing tone, from the onset. FjR

This man I loved dearly, headed for early death There was nothing anybody could do, to stop you This was a losing battle, and you really knew I like the verses very much........you must be very well-known there in the States...it seems like..

A poems lamenting, remembering joy, and ending in sorrow. I'm really impressed with the way you structure your line and how each line line wrap around-even with comma breaks. Thanks your comment on one of my poems.

A wonderful poem Deborah, a nice flowing rhyming structure. A pleasure to read. Best wishes, Andrew

this is poetry.. the rhythm is astounding.. the rhyming is superb.

The cold, the hunger, the lonliness and pain Shall all be washed clean, from within the rain ur poems are loaded with spirituality, I shall treasure your words...

Interesting and beautiful 10s

Waiting for death to claim another cherished life...just like the ticking of a clock.If we had more time.a ten from me.

As in your other poems, your flow is outstanding and your word choice is commendable. I enjoyed this one for it's message, though, for I can somewhat sympathize.

yea it does reming me of my poem Suicidal Love! Amazing work yet again... i love how you describe everything... AMAZING!

This is good, i think its a dirge, I could imgine what it feels to lose someone so dear to us. I like this poem, and i'll rate it 10+

very nice and heart rendering poem with the start of so much pain and suffering.........well pennedv.........

milady this is very touching.. way more than a verse. i am sorry you had to lose him.. i hope you saw a light at he end of this dreary tunnel