Sunday, October 23, 2016

39 Straps Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thirty nine straps
yet the badge of rage
was no where on your face
Bleeding, entrails dripping
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Jeresi Katusime
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Susan Williams 23 October 2016

Powerful faith poem. There were many ways to write this but I like the way you have your words stepping along the page, His struggle up that hill mirrored by the placement of your lines. The repetition of 39 straps scoured the memory of those faithful who read this. Great creative piece of writing. 10

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