(377) Turbulent Crippled Emotions (Part Two) Comments

Great imagery Melvina that pulled me through making me want to get to the end and discover what was in store for this woman...and her neighbors! I have to admit it gave me a smile to see the retaliation factor after how she was treated as if she we nothing....and then how she held the final card by making things worse for her neighbors. This poem makes me feel sorry for both sides...her and her neighbors who worry about their property value...I too would worry if that was built next door to me! ! ((Smile)) ANother great write.......... *Shelley*

Yeah, good progression, you've got me now! ...... Ez

It seems to be gettting with each time. Great work. I can't wait to read part three!

Yes i love a looney tune.. great part 2

Melvina I have the solution to the offending structure.Its called 'The nightrider bulldozer'.I like this one cant wait to see the outcome! ! ! ! Take Care, Sid John.

An excellent part two. Can't wait for part three. Hope it is soon. David

Melvina, you've certainly constructed this poem up to code... I can hardly wait for phase three! ! Brian

You've turned the burners up, my dear....This series is firing up with anxiety & intrigue! WELL CRAFTED & ASTUTE PROGRESSION OF ANTICIPATION.... FJR

The city is not going to like this one either! Grow and double..........Whoa! ! I think it's time for the neighborhood to get together, help her build a fence that everyone can live with. Hopefully it's not to late for a gate................to acceptance. Wonderful write Melvina............Looking forward to Part 3................Diane