Friday, August 25, 2006

(373) Trust In……….. Comments

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I’m no slave, yet you pit me here.
The verge of death's grave.

To sleep, weep in the mudded dirt.
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Melvina Germain
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Dr John Celes 22 April 2007

True, Our only Master in whom we trust and lead our earthly life in fortitude! Yet, what a loving Master, our God is! He waits with love to give us BLISS! God bless you, Melvina Please read my poem, 'We gotta live, ' love, Dr John Celes

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Tailor Bell 01 September 2006

great write, Melvina. inner light dealing with outer strife. i love the picture of the struggle. -Tailor

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Will Barber 27 August 2006

A passionate poem. It speaks of revolt against the hand of man, submission to the hand of the divine. I like it very much. - Will

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Nimal Dunuhinga 26 August 2006

You suffer but it's not a suffering for you; come to a conclusion as your firm belief on the God within yourself.That trust speaks in this poem.

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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