37 - After The Bomb Came Silence Comments

I like the title of this peice, I am not sure whether the rhyming patten totally works in the poem, as well as some of the rhymes you have chosen, it distracted me a little from the theme. I was particually drawn by the second stanza, i thought it showed great promise, and the second, third line was really evocative. I think if you reviewed a few of the lines, this would be a very powerful account of the horror and the aftermath of the event. Good work Robin