362. Comments

i love these silly ones of yours! ! ! to MyPoemList and to Section A of November's showcase, on my site. favorite (of many) lines: even the hamster 9 foot small. fine rhyming, though not all rhymes are what i would call perfect. there was no need for that! my suggestion for a title: blowing up balloons with a baseball bat it captures the silly flavor, .... and i 'love' alliterations! THANKS, Profanisaurus, A. bri :)

As it watched! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.