Thursday, March 15, 2007

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Rating: 5.0

Wind flashing through my strands
Mounted cheeks, glimmering tusks
Admiration for the driver, he’s my big brother
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Oni Hayes
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Michael Gale 24 March 2007

Great poem. Great line(Rubber tornado) . An easy tenner. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Stug Jordan 19 March 2007

Mature poem with a young voice. Each line is like a line on its own rather than part of a continuing piece but which still gives the poem a nice fluidity: sometimes a bad thing, but works wonderfully in this poem.

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Oni Hayes

Oni Hayes

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